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    Unique effects. Depth requires work, you need to fix the flow, do something with the c4d, it looks weird because of the random opacity levels on some places. the lightning sparkles look too messy, place them in a different spot, use them as light sources maybe. I see some soft brushing near the sword but it looks so random. Always remember that when you're adding some lighting related effects, decide a perfect spot for light and don't forget to reflect it somewhere (not only on the render).

    This is a style which I haven't seen earlier and I consider it weird because it is basically copy and paste with some opacity adjustments. I know you've been here for a while but I haven't noticed a major improvement.

    Anyways, good luck with your future work.
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    I'm sorry but this is horrible. Is this even a serious submission? 2 Downloaded stock-renders placed on a background with a completely different color-scheme. Nothing else. If you did something in c4d, the only thing I could possible think of is the object that you used explosion or shatter on, I would sit here and say alot more but cartilage already covered most of it.

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    not really your best work dude, you should try making the fractals be blue and white, as if the girl is actually like smashing through the background, but other that that, really nice! keep it up


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    i personally do not like any of it, looks like you slapped a bunch of images on top of each other without any thought about it what so ever.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cartilage View Post
    Unique effects. Depth requires work, you need to fix the flow, do something with the c4d, it looks weird because of the random opacity levels on some places. the lightning sparkles look too messy, place them in a different spot, use them as light sources maybe. I see some soft brushing near the sword but it looks so random. Always remember that when you're adding some lighting related effects, decide a perfect spot for light and don't forget to reflect it somewhere (not only on the render).

    This is a style which I haven't seen earlier and I consider it weird because it is basically copy and paste with some opacity adjustments. I know you've been here for a while but I haven't noticed a major improvement.

    Anyways, good luck with your future work.
    Thanks for your CnC, mate. And I have improved MUCH, so you obviously haven't actually been looking at my graphics. O.O

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    I'm sorry but this is horrible. Is this even a serious submission? 2 Downloaded stock-renders placed on a background with a completely different color-scheme. Nothing else. If you did something in c4d, the only thing I could possible think of is the object that you used explosion or shatter on, I would sit here and say alot more but cartilage already covered most of it.
    No nope nope nope. Not even close. Yes, it's a serious submission, and it's better than most of yours. So, by your logic, I could say the same to you. Maybe one color scheme for every graphic isn't original, maybe I want to improvise? I didn't do anything in C4D. I don't use C4D for anything but text.

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    i personally do not like any of it, looks like you slapped a bunch of images on top of each other without any thought about it what so ever.
    I didn't, and I put a lot of thought into it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bagrov View Post
    Thanks for your CnC, mate. And I have improved MUCH, so you obviously haven't actually been looking at my graphics. O.O


    No nope nope nope. Not even close. Yes, it's a serious submission, and it's better than most of yours. So, by your logic, I could say the same to you. Maybe one color scheme for every graphic isn't original, maybe I want to improvise? I didn't do anything in C4D. I don't use C4D for anything but text.


    I didn't, and I put a lot of thought into it.
    u r silly goose.
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    Way, way, way too random. You seriously need to fix the flow

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    I'm normally not the kind of guy writing a comment like this and especially not in the graphics section but ok.
    Leaving the CnC(not see and see..) for what it is aka could use a lot of work as it really just looks like this took you a few minutes.
    Now onto the other part; your ignorance to deal with CnC the right way, all you do is attack the person who posted anything that has only the slights bit of criticism on your work, which is were CnC is for. You also think your better than most people in the GFX section and act that way. So please learn to deal with it.
    EDIT: Do you now get why people with the designer rank don't really mind giving CnC anymore cause oftene people just flame at their remakrs and ignore it
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    This isn't looking that good as your other showcases.
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