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  1. #1 I'm From A Place Like Narnia 
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    Eh, half asleep and still doing this, needs a ton of improvement, but hey.. that's what feedback is for.



    I know in these recent posts of mine everyone has given me feedback on the smudging. I thank all of you for the contribution towards my designing. This design kind of got me thinking of narnia, so on my desktop it's known as "narnia.png" I'd love feedback from all of you debating whether or not I should continue with my graphic life. Some people tend to get my hopes down and tell me i'm not gonna go anywhere because I'm a terrible artist. They may be the case, but I'd like feedback from all of you.
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    very nice.
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    You should not stop doing graphics cause other people said so.
    keep doing what you like and enjoy, and sooner or later you will pass us with your skills.

    About the piece, the nebulas you used seems low quality.
    also smudging of the render could be better done.
    and the pices lacks some basic elements such as lightning and depth.

    KIU Though!
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    Definitely fix his legs. You over smudged those a little too much. I'd say the render and that thing it's holding or whatever needs a good sharpened. Since it's in the middle and is a render you can tell it's a focal point, but it lacks the actual focal point quality.

    Hmm, the depth is a little weird. It'd be cool if you put some of the smudging from the background over the render itself to like it's being involved in it as well.

    Other than that, the contrasting colors are nice. You Set up the city in the background rather nicely. And, the smudging on the main looks nice if you did that.

    KIU
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    The smudge cripples the render, it's just too much. the fractals are misplaced and should be less visible.
    The render could do with some depth. The piece looks chaotic as a whole, and once you've fixed up on the info I mentioned, I would go ahead and add some gradient maps.
    Also, go ahead and add a lightsource using a large soft brush on soft light here: KIU

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    looks sweet but i find it pretty busy, theres like three different things as the background, remove the smudges on the lion bais legs kiu tho looks cute


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    Continue man, you're definitely improving. The only reason you feel so down is because your expectations are way too high. When I first started designing, I sucked, but I was in a community where a lot of people were at a similar level, so I was easily impressed by my work.

    It'll take time, but the fact that you're improving shows you're heading in the right direction
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