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    ''For all have sinned and fall short of the glory of god''.

    I'm finding it hard to provide critique because you're clearly, already a very established graphic designer. I like the way C4D compliments the piece, there's not too much going on and there's not a wide variety of colors, a very subtle, quite vocal piece! The only thing i would say is the bottom half looks very naked, and so too, the bottom right corner. Maybe if you changed the height dimension it'd be better? That's just my personal opinion though.

    I love this piece, however.
    People not believing in you doesn't mean you can't achieve it.
    Where the most inspirational spirit lies is within you,
    believe in yourself even when everybody doesn't.
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    Bring the focal point out more. It's so sharpened it looks choppy, try blurring around the focal point just the smallest percent, that way it "gives life" to your focal

    Really love it though. I used to be a big GFX fanatic myself, great work.
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    you should collab with queen amanda, yous would make an awesome tag together, but ot; awesome stuff, good to see you're still tagging!


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jasper Dolphin View Post
    Bring the focal point out more. It's so sharpened it looks choppy, try blurring around the focal point just the smallest percent, that way it "gives life" to your focal

    Really love it though. I used to be a big GFX fanatic myself, great work.
    I have a problem of over sharpening. I'll look into that, thanks.

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    ''For all have sinned and fall short of the glory of god''.

    I'm finding it hard to provide critique because you're clearly, already a very established graphic designer. I like the way C4D compliments the piece, there's not too much going on and there's not a wide variety of colors, a very subtle, quite vocal piece! The only thing i would say is the bottom half looks very naked, and so too, the bottom right corner. Maybe if you changed the height dimension it'd be better? That's just my personal opinion though.

    I love this piece, however.
    Thanks, and yes, I see what you mean .
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    you should collab with queen amanda, yous would make an awesome tag together, but ot; awesome stuff, good to see you're still tagging!
    Yeah, zillo was telling me the same thing, & I'm just tryin to see if I still have my tagging skills left

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    Now that's really cool. Only thing I can say is that the text doesn't appeal to me, just looks like a standard font with bevel and emboss. Kiu

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    I've put a small cnc on TF for you already, but I'll expand here.

    Your Lighting is really overwelming and very strong, the lighting also doesn't reflect back, making it look unrealistic.

    the flow of this tag is really gorgious and the depth aswell.

    I still think that there are some quality flaws in the tag, because I can see pixels..

    composition is pretty boring but the focal point is okay.

    execution of concept: 8/10
    execution of technique: 7.5/10
    looks: 8/10
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    Haha the big boy made something fabulous again.
    At the first sight I thought the render was a boy, now i'm not sure about that, while taking a closer look.

    Goodjob, i don't see many flaws
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    Good stuff.
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    ambient light generated by the flares doesnt look like it affects any surfaces
    Last edited by zillo; 08-23-2014 at 03:55 AM.
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