Originally Posted by
Bart_
you should use more foreground effects, to create more depth. the piece looks rather flat. the piece is also boring and looks like a W.I.P. 1/2 of the tag is covered with pitch black space, you could fill them up.
your lighting also is way to strong, and takes the focal point away. the atmosphere is okay if you could add more elements to the tag. composition is pretty boring.
when the picture is displayed in the normal dimensions, the quality really lacks and the planet really should have way more details/textures in it.
another tip. get creative, use more things you can't call this a photo manipulation yet. with this theme you can add several more things in the space.
(e.g spaceships, more planets, moons, planetrings, and who knows maybe a bar on a meteorite?)
this are your current W.I.P grades, don't get them to serious it's to motivate you and expanding your LP.
Looks: 5.5/10
Execution of technique: 6/10
Execution of concept: 3/10