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    Quote Originally Posted by Liam Baby View Post

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    you should use more foreground effects, to create more depth. the piece looks rather flat. the piece is also boring and looks like a W.I.P. 1/2 of the tag is covered with pitch black space, you could fill them up.

    your lighting also is way to strong, and takes the focal point away. the atmosphere is okay if you could add more elements to the tag. composition is pretty boring.

    when the picture is displayed in the normal dimensions, the quality really lacks and the planet really should have way more details/textures in it.

    another tip. get creative, use more things you can't call this a photo manipulation yet. with this theme you can add several more things in the space.
    (e.g spaceships, more planets, moons, planetrings, and who knows maybe a bar on a meteorite?)

    this are your current W.I.P grades, don't get them to serious it's to motivate you and expanding your LP.
    Looks: 5.5/10
    Execution of technique: 6/10
    Execution of concept: 3/10
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bart_ View Post
    you should use more foreground effects, to create more depth. the piece looks rather flat. the piece is also boring and looks like a W.I.P. 1/2 of the tag is covered with pitch black space, you could fill them up.

    your lighting also is way to strong, and takes the focal point away. the atmosphere is okay if you could add more elements to the tag. composition is pretty boring.

    when the picture is displayed in the normal dimensions, the quality really lacks and the planet really should have way more details/textures in it.

    another tip. get creative, use more things you can't call this a photo manipulation yet. with this theme you can add several more things in the space.
    (e.g spaceships, more planets, moons, planetrings, and who knows maybe a bar on a meteorite?)

    this are your current W.I.P grades, don't get them to serious it's to motivate you and expanding your LP.
    Looks: 5.5/10
    Execution of technique: 6/10
    Execution of concept: 3/10
    Thanks for the feedback and tips, I appreciate it a lot. This proper CnC will most definitely be of use to me. If I ever try to re-create this, I'll definitely include the things you pointed out. Thanks!

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    looks great, it doesn't look flat to me at all
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    That does look great, Im not a graphics person so i wouldn't know what to improve, But that is some impressive work good job
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nucleon View Post
    looks great, it doesn't look flat to me at all
    Quote Originally Posted by InsinuateRS View Post
    That does look great, Im not a graphics person so i wouldn't know what to improve, But that is some impressive work good job
    Thanks guys

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    Looking good so far, Liam. It just needs more to it overall.

    The negative space is overpowering and I can see the edge of an effect at the very top, in the middle.
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    As mentioned before, the lighting is overpowering it.
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    Looks amazing , great job :O
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