Originally Posted by
Juuichi
There's nothing particularly wrong with your advertisement, but using vague statements such as "many bosses" and "custom items" is really uninspiring if you're actually trying to encourage people to play. I think it would do you a lot of good to expand on your ad and give more details and/or media other than a few interfaces. "Community driven" is a term you see long-standing and active servers use as a way to back their reputation. That's not to say being community driven won't attract players, but those potential players need better incentives than you've shown here to question logging in.
Good luck, and looking at your other posts, you need that and a bit more experience. You'll have to do your best to make sure your server isn't the one gone in a few months, as opposed to the players.